I don't need anybody, see?
I just need myself to be with me.
My inner self which drives me.
Which does not take a break from trying me.
Which has a great sense of humor.
Which makes my stomach hurt with laughter.
Which gives me advice to make things right.
Which leads me to places bright.
That inner self with its stupid little voice.
That inner self which is always right.
Which likes to write lame poems.
Which loves to read that crazy stuff.
That inner self which i seem to have lost.
Which i am trying hard to find wit all the strength i have got.
I just need myself to be with me.
My inner self which drives me.
Which does not take a break from trying me.
Which has a great sense of humor.
Which makes my stomach hurt with laughter.
Which gives me advice to make things right.
Which leads me to places bright.
That inner self with its stupid little voice.
That inner self which is always right.
Which likes to write lame poems.
Which loves to read that crazy stuff.
That inner self which i seem to have lost.
Which i am trying hard to find wit all the strength i have got.
That inner self which is still eluding me.
Without which i cant complete this.
Without which i cant complete this.
Voila!
ReplyDeleteU r echoing my thoughts...
I am also pondering harder and deeper to find myself!!! Enjoyed your compilation
Thank you :) :)
DeleteThat's nicely written Arpitha :) We can't love others without loving self! This poem shows you love yourself very much ;) :D
ReplyDeleteThank you Valli :) :)
DeleteWow.. It gets deep in the end.. :)
ReplyDeleteQuite meaningful post.. :)
Good to see you after so long! :)
:) Feels good to write after such a long time too :) Thank you :) :)
DeleteThis poem and the theme of your blog in general reminds me of a very famous song 'November Rain' by Guns N' Roses. Axel Rose croons:
ReplyDelete'Sometimes I need some time on my
Own
Sometimes I need some time all alone
Everybody needs some time
On their own
Don't you know you need some time all alone'
And I couldn't agree more!!! :)
I have heard that song and yes, sometimes we need to be alone.
DeleteThanks for the comment. :) :)
These well-scripted lines and the theme of your blog in general reminds me of a very famous song 'NOVEMBER RAIN' by GUNS N' ROSES. AXEL ROSE croons:
ReplyDelete'ometimes I need some time on my
Own
Sometimes I need some time all alone
Everybody needs some time
On their own
Don't you know you need some time all alone'
And I couldn't agree more!!!
I can't explain how much that spoke for me. Maybe not for this exact moment, but in the past, I've felt exactly this, and you've expressed it awesomely :)
ReplyDeleteA poem makes sense only when you can relate to it.. Glad you could connect with it :) :)
DeleteThanks a lot :) :)
beautiful :) poem with lot of feelings :) luv it :)
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