Wednesday, February 27, 2013

Inner self.

I don't need anybody, see?
I just need myself to be with me.

My inner self which drives me.
Which does not take a break from trying me.

Which has a great sense of humor.
Which makes my stomach hurt with laughter.

Which gives me advice to make things right.
Which leads me to places bright.

That inner self with its stupid little voice.
That inner self which is always right.

Which likes to write lame poems.
Which loves to read that crazy stuff.

That inner self which i seem to have lost.
Which i am trying hard to find wit all the strength i have got.

That inner self which is still eluding me.
Without which i cant complete this.

12 comments:

  1. Voila!
    U r echoing my thoughts...
    I am also pondering harder and deeper to find myself!!! Enjoyed your compilation

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  2. That's nicely written Arpitha :) We can't love others without loving self! This poem shows you love yourself very much ;) :D

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  3. Wow.. It gets deep in the end.. :)

    Quite meaningful post.. :)

    Good to see you after so long! :)

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    1. :) Feels good to write after such a long time too :) Thank you :) :)

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  4. This poem and the theme of your blog in general reminds me of a very famous song 'November Rain' by Guns N' Roses. Axel Rose croons:

    'Sometimes I need some time on my
    Own
    Sometimes I need some time all alone
    Everybody needs some time
    On their own
    Don't you know you need some time all alone'

    And I couldn't agree more!!! :)

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    1. I have heard that song and yes, sometimes we need to be alone.
      Thanks for the comment. :) :)

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  5. These well-scripted lines and the theme of your blog in general reminds me of a very famous song 'NOVEMBER RAIN' by GUNS N' ROSES. AXEL ROSE croons:
    'ometimes I need some time on my
    Own
    Sometimes I need some time all alone
    Everybody needs some time
    On their own
    Don't you know you need some time all alone'

    And I couldn't agree more!!!

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  6. I can't explain how much that spoke for me. Maybe not for this exact moment, but in the past, I've felt exactly this, and you've expressed it awesomely :)

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    1. A poem makes sense only when you can relate to it.. Glad you could connect with it :) :)
      Thanks a lot :) :)

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  7. beautiful :) poem with lot of feelings :) luv it :)

    i blog at http://jrnywithprabhu.blogspot.in/ :) hope u like it

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